My Odyssy

With a brittle heart immutable 
I fight a formidable battle with myself 
How do I sketch this scenerio 
In the midst of plenty peoples 
Yet unnoticed, plenty happy faces: mine like one who took lemon instead of orange 

Standing demurely in the room 
My presence could only provoke 
A tenuous interest from onlookers 

Am I in the wrong place?. 
I asked myself with a heart bereft of emotions, I need a beer interlude. 
This reunion must start all over 

Only then did I realise that 
This was for the class of 94
Mine is 95
Oh Lord!,  I thought I was insane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/14/2018 12:44:00 AM
I really like this poem! The message is passionately said and strongly felt.
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Chigbo Solomon Peter
Date: 1/14/2018 2:55:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 1/14/2018 12:38:00 AM
At the beginning I thought - this is a great description of feeling socially awkward - then you hit me with the punchline. It made me laugh. Thank you.
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Chigbo Solomon Peter
Date: 1/14/2018 2:56:00 AM
You are welcome. The idea is suspense
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