Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

My Obliged Preterition

whoever helps me 
                               no need to mention their names
                                     owe and bow to them 

                                         if in any case 
                               though they misunderstand me 
                                        i do never mind  




                             Preterition contest : Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick May 21, 2016 at 8:39 AM Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara Bl Devnath May 21, 2016 at 11:08 AM Thanks my lovely sweet friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2016 at 8:00 PM Looks as good as anyone else's!! That was a new word for me, BL. I have not even posted mine yet!! Bl Devnath May 5, 2016 at 8:33 PM Certainly i will read your's and hope that will be nice. Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2016 at 12:23 PM - Show compassion and willingness to help others, a gift we should use everyday - Great written - Luck in contest, dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath May 5, 2016 at 5:18 PM Thanks my lovely friend for stopping by. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl