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My Oath

long ago i took an oath to do the best i can i gave it when i was a cub scout learning how to be a man my mood was solemn and sombre for i made it with my heart am i true, people wonder for me being faithfull is an art was my oath for something great or did i take it in vain my charactar stands in question did my actions honor my name to honor God and man with this invisible trust through trial and temtations we search ourselves we must duty is an obligation to do what's right not wrong to ignore rightious feeling is a trait that's terribly flawed to honor Him that made me and those with which i live i'll proudly keep my oath and give the best that i can give

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Date: 8/13/2009 8:20:00 PM
Our beliefs and trust give us strength in this world. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 8/12/2009 11:33:00 AM
John, you have most certainly loved up to your boy scout oath! Your faith and loving heart always shine in your poetry. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 8/10/2009 5:05:00 AM
Your faith John will keep you grounded.
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Date: 8/6/2009 11:19:00 PM
John iii, I really like the content here. It is well said. Boy Scouts is a great organization. It is nice to know that the goodness taught is in fact for a life time. Very nice. Lovingly, Dane Soup mail.
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Date: 8/6/2009 8:51:00 PM
Very noble indeed. My children and Illyanna and I were just talking about blind faith tonight. Wonderful write......Aleera the "Wicked" one
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Date: 8/6/2009 5:40:00 PM
A mild yet powerful aproach of early memories. Personnally I am still trying to master all my commitments myself when I am able to focus. Enjoy your night.
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Date: 8/6/2009 2:01:00 PM
Brilliant biography--keep this faith John,a fine good man--well penned--charma
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Date: 8/6/2009 10:16:00 AM
Beautifully written,John, I creed to live ones life. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/6/2009 9:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and will be back to read more of it soon John. I have no doubt you mean every word. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2009 8:17:00 AM
Very well done...soupmail......The Southern Belle
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Date: 8/5/2009 5:01:00 PM
You sound like a noble persona, John, in this write. So much of honor has been misplaced, gone down the drain, these days. Sincerely Moses
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