Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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My Nisus

My nisus to go out on the porch
Once again to write verse
About the orange fireball rising
A new day given its warm birth

The fireball casting pink and sand
Silhouetting pine trees
Wouldn't this be so awesome now
'Twould put my mind at ease  

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Jack Horne September 27, 2019 at 9:18 AM had to look up the word nisus, lol - i always love your porch inspirations Sara Kendrick September 27, 2019 at 6:43 PM Jack, Glad you learned a new word today. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Gershon Wolf August 15, 2019 at 11:23 AM I hope that your nisus doesn't go to pieces (LOL) waiting for that cooling trend. :) gw Sara Kendrick August 15, 2019 at 5:25 PM Gershon, It has been hard between the heat and the fractured pelvis for I have had to stay inside mostly lying in a recliner by day and the bed at night. A lot of pain for about 4 or 5 weeks. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sandra Adams August 3, 2019 at 10:34 AM This is beautiful Sara... good to see your post! Hope you soon get to enjoy that porch soon ...:) hugs Sara Kendrick August 10, 2019 at 5:49 AM Sandra, Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope that we get a cooling trend soon making the porch much more comfortable. Sara

Sand Blown August 3, 2019 at 8:13 AM awesome!?...wowza, it read like you were there at the dawning Sara Kendrick August 10, 2019 at 5:51 AM SB, Your comment is right on. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues July 30, 2019 at 10:44 AM A beauty, Sandra! Sara Kendrick July 30, 2019 at 12:24 PM Kim, Thanks you for the kind review. Your visit is uplifting. Sara