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My nisus to go out on the porch Once again to write verse About the orange fireball rising A new day given its warm birth The fireball casting pink and sand Silhouetting pine trees Wouldn't this be so awesome now 'Twould put my mind at ease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/27/2019 9:18:00 AM
had to look up the word nisus, lol - i always love your porch inspirations
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/27/2019 6:43:00 PM
Jack, Glad you learned a new word today. Thanks for stopping by. Sara
Date: 8/15/2019 11:23:00 AM
I hope that your nisus doesn't go to pieces (LOL) waiting for that cooling trend. :) gw
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2019 5:25:00 PM
Gershon, It has been hard between the heat and the fractured pelvis for I have had to stay inside mostly lying in a recliner by day and the bed at night. A lot of pain for about 4 or 5 weeks. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 8/3/2019 10:34:00 AM
This is beautiful Sara... good to see your post! Hope you soon get to enjoy that porch soon ...:) hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2019 5:49:00 AM
Sandra, Thanks for the visit to my page. I hope that we get a cooling trend soon making the porch much more comfortable. Sara
Date: 8/3/2019 8:13:00 AM
awesome!?...wowza, it read like you were there at the dawning
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/10/2019 5:51:00 AM
SB, Your comment is right on. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Date: 7/30/2019 10:44:00 AM
A beauty, Sandra!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/30/2019 12:24:00 PM
Kim, Thanks you for the kind review. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

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