My New Year's Resolution

Based on pleading from
the seams of my skinny jeans…
Eat fewer HoHos


December 20, 2015

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David Williams

Date: 12/18/2011 12:05:00 PM

Natalie congrats on your win, don't know what HoHos are? but i guess they are fattening, good luck..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/18/2011 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Resolution Haiku" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2011 11:20:00 PM

this one was REALLY good, Natalie. Good luck with the resolution.Congratulations.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/17/2011 10:23:00 AM

I LOVE this ENCOURAGING HAIKU!! I didn't know your jeans had a voice til just now. haha. Congrats on this fun yet healthy write. You always have me smiling with your awesome creativity. A very pretty pic too! Happy Hollydays, Natalie! Gwendolen

Tracy Edwards

Date: 12/17/2011 6:14:00 AM

Congrats on your 4th place in my contest Nat...just treat yourself to a hoho once and a while, you gorgeous just the way you are xxx

Tracy Edwards
Date: 12/17/2011 6:17:00 AM

your*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2011 9:02:00 PM

that's why I don't make resolutions, They are just too hard. But I sure love this one, it's got a really sweet ending!! those ho hos!! Clever way to do the contest, Natalie.