My New Year's Resolution

Based on pleading from
the seams of my skinny jeans…
Eat fewer HoHos


December 20, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Williams Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Natalie congrats on your win, don't know what HoHos are? but i guess they are fattening, good luck..David
Brown Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Resolution Haiku" contest Natalie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 11:20 PM
this one was REALLY good, Natalie. Good luck with the resolution.Congratulations.
Song Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 10:23 AM
I LOVE this ENCOURAGING HAIKU!! I didn't know your jeans had a voice til just now. haha. Congrats on this fun yet healthy write. You always have me smiling with your awesome creativity. A very pretty pic too! Happy Hollydays, Natalie! Gwendolen
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December 17, 2011 at 6:14 AM
Congrats on your 4th place in my contest Nat...just treat yourself to a hoho once and a while, you gorgeous just the way you are xxx
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December 17, 2011 at 6:17 AM
your*
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 9:02 PM
that's why I don't make resolutions, They are just too hard. But I sure love this one, it's got a really sweet ending!! those ho hos!! Clever way to do the contest, Natalie.
Cooper Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 9:39 AM
another great write. thank you for your comment on my book. it is poetry I suppose I should let all know. lol
Horne Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 9:29 AM
LOL, yes, we're both making the same NY resolutions! I fear I'll be one of the 90%, but I'll try hard to be in the 10% with you : )
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December 13, 2011 at 4:33 PM
Sounds like you are a gal who will do it. All the bes in the contest and your resolve!
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 7:12 AM
Fantastic Natalie. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
Lane Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 3:36 PM
I laughed.
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