My Mysterious Boyfriend

Ring, ring, ring ~ my phone rang in the middle of the night I picked it up, my voice as pale as a ghost so white "Melissa, it's Jason...meet me at the park in half an hour" My boyfriend of 3 years, what could he want this very hour? I wasted not a moment, I'm set and grabbed my keys I hurried down the stairs and nearly fell on my knees I'm nervous as hell, couldn't stop wondering of what's going on On my way, I prayed "Lord, let this be of light's dawn". I made it just in time, I saw him standing by a tree I walked closer, my face full of questions deeper than a sea He stared at me with eyes so silent, his body in a freeze I searched his mind but nothing to find, I felt the wind's cold breeze. He reached for my hand and handed me a piece "Open it Melissa, please...Don't let my warm heart miss, A smile of yours, or tears that I someday may no longer see" I shed tears of yes as he went on his knee... "Happy Anniversary, Will You Marry Me?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/27/2015 9:21:00 AM
Beautiful poem my dear Sarah , it's cozy and touchy..wish you a happy new year...hugs / / :D dalia
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Date: 6/14/2012 11:53:00 AM
I like the end of the poem nice touch well written I like poetry about romance and love cool write x david scott
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Date: 4/5/2012 5:54:00 PM
In the middle of the night? Ha,ha.. I think he could have picked a better time? Nice write!Once again... :o)
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Date: 4/6/2012 5:37:00 AM
Hahaha could be :)) .. thank you Dan :)
Date: 3/24/2012 12:21:00 AM
Congratulations!! A very moving write! Thanks for sharing. May you two be happy always, and thanks for commenting on my poem today. Caroline.
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Date: 3/23/2012 2:20:00 PM
Smile ˜ Slipping The Slipper Upon Your Precious Foot ˜ Ahhh, Tis My Chosen Beloved * Always, John!:) ˜
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/23/2012 5:33:00 PM
I'm sorry John, I am lost with your words...kindly allow your poetic language rest aside and do tell me what you truly meant..thank you :)
Date: 3/23/2012 11:23:00 AM
A touching write. Well done!
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/23/2012 5:28:00 PM
thank you Carol :)
Date: 3/21/2012 3:53:00 PM
interesting theme, Sarah, flows very well and well written. harry
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/23/2012 5:28:00 PM
Harry, thanks a lot :)
Date: 3/20/2012 7:01:00 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Sarah. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you very much Carol :)
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