My Mysterious Boyfriend

Ring, ring, ring ~ my phone rang in the middle of the night I picked it up, my voice as pale as a ghost so white "Melissa, it's Jason...meet me at the park in half an hour" My boyfriend of 3 years, what could he want this very hour? I wasted not a moment, I'm set and grabbed my keys I hurried down the stairs and nearly fell on my knees I'm nervous as hell, couldn't stop wondering of what's going on On my way, I prayed "Lord, let this be of light's dawn". I made it just in time, I saw him standing by a tree I walked closer, my face full of questions deeper than a sea He stared at me with eyes so silent, his body in a freeze I searched his mind but nothing to find, I felt the wind's cold breeze. He reached for my hand and handed me a piece "Open it Melissa, please...Don't let my warm heart miss, A smile of yours, or tears that I someday may no longer see" I shed tears of yes as he went on his knee... "Happy Anniversary, Will You Marry Me?"
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Shahein Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 9:21 AM
Beautiful poem my dear Sarah , it's cozy and touchy..wish you a happy new year...hugs / / :D dalia
Scott Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 11:53 AM
I like the end of the poem nice touch well written I like poetry about romance and love cool write x david scott
Kearley Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 5:54 PM
In the middle of the night? Ha,ha.. I think he could have picked a better time? Nice write!Once again... :o)
Jabri Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 5:37 AM
Hahaha could be :)) .. thank you Dan :)
Delacroix Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 12:21 AM
Congratulations!! A very moving write! Thanks for sharing. May you two be happy always, and thanks for commenting on my poem today. Caroline.
Rhinem Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 2:20 PM
Smile ˜ Slipping The Slipper Upon Your Precious Foot ˜ Ahhh, Tis My Chosen Beloved * Always, John!:) ˜
Jabri Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 5:33 PM
I'm sorry John, I am lost with your words...kindly allow your poetic language rest aside and do tell me what you truly meant..thank you :)
Eastman Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 11:23 AM
A touching write. Well done!
Jabri Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 5:28 PM
thank you Carol :)
Horsman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 3:53 PM
interesting theme, Sarah, flows very well and well written. harry
Jabri Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 5:28 PM
Harry, thanks a lot :)
Brown Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 7:01 AM
Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Sarah. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love, Carol
Jabri Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 5:29 PM
thank you very much Carol :)
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