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My Muse

I’m staring at my notebook Whose pages I’ve perused To double-check a topic; My muse is quite bemused. For lately I’ve been empty Where always I’ve enthused. I don’t know why poetic themes Have slowed and barely oozed. My confidence is sagging; My ego’s slightly bruised. I need a jolt of energy To somehow be infused. But meanwhile as I struggle, Where once I blithely cruised, My muse just sits there mocking And I’m really not amused.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/9/2018 5:19:00 PM
Liked how this is all over the place in rhythm. You held it together well. The last line is a bit weak though I think. Always love how you have such original styles. Creative and with strong references with wonderful words and wording. A pleasure and learning experience. Thanks Trevor
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:42:00 AM
Your muse was fully alive in this piece, Ilene!!
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Date: 7/3/2018 1:29:00 PM
cute and clever as ever, Ilene. Don't worry. Something will appear in the news,maybe about Trump, and you will be right back in the saddle again!
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:29:00 PM
You sure amused me with your words Ilene, I know my muse has been like a temperamental teenager lately and I think our muses are on cruises - so we should meet up together and maybe they will be tempted out of holiday mode!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/3/2018 11:08:00 AM
Giggles, not a'mused, one bit ;) xomo enjoyed! xomo
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Date: 7/3/2018 10:08:00 AM
Your poems are always cleverly written and delivered. Apparently you did this all by yourself while she sits aloof and mocking. We can all relate to this, we've all been temporarily abandoned. My muse is a brat because she loves to return while I'm driving, bathing or in any other way preoccupied without pen or paper. A joy to read! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 7/3/2018 9:24:00 AM
- Always a pleasure to read your everyday life poems, Ilene - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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