My Muddled Mind

As a child I used to think

Of all the things I wanted

When I grew I liked to drink

And it left my mind stunted

So now I can't remember

'Cause my memory isn't clear

My birthday's in December

But I don't know in what year
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Faure Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing your work
Freie Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Thanks for reading it Joyce. I still think my best poem was my first. Actually it was more prose than poetry.
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