Beautiful Scars Poet Haiku

My Mountain Releases Tranquil Fire

rocks crush my mountain
mountains release my spirit
sticks light tranquil fire

Written By: Laura Loo
Date Written: February 10, 2016

***The word "fire" can be used as one or two syllables, I have chosen to use it as one syllable***

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Angeline Haikutwinkle February 16, 2016 at 8:33 AM wonderful imagery

White Sage February 12, 2016 at 10:36 AM another excellent haiku Laura Beautiful Scars February 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM Thank you White Sage -luloo *thanks*

Katie Bugnacki February 10, 2016 at 9:55 PM I saw the other poem you posted at a haiku. I'm still trying to learn how it works..I'm kinda lost actually. But this haiku is wonderful to me. I like wolves and anything having to do nature. My fav animal is a bald eagle! Good poem KB Beautiful Scars February 12, 2016 at 5:37 PM If you need any help just soup mail me :) anytime -luloo Beautiful Scars February 11, 2016 at 10:55 AM KB, thank you for your kind words! Have a great day *Smiles* -luloo :)