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My Mountain Releases Tranquil Fire

rocks crush my mountain mountains release my spirit sticks light tranquil fire Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: February 10, 2016 ***The word "fire" can be used as one or two syllables, I have chosen to use it as one syllable***

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Date: 2/16/2016 8:33:00 AM
wonderful imagery
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Date: 2/12/2016 10:36:00 AM
another excellent haiku Laura
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thank you White Sage -luloo *thanks*
Date: 2/10/2016 9:55:00 PM
I saw the other poem you posted at a haiku. I'm still trying to learn how it works..I'm kinda lost actually. But this haiku is wonderful to me. I like wolves and anything having to do nature. My fav animal is a bald eagle! Good poem KB
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:37:00 PM
If you need any help just soup mail me :) anytime -luloo
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:55:00 AM
KB, thank you for your kind words! Have a great day *Smiles* -luloo :)

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