My Mother In Laws House

Never had I embraced an officious abode as religiously before

But this striking red and white interior I started to adore

If I was out on a run and needed to use the loo

I’d stop by and relieve myself with no urgency to remove my shoe

Nested on the second floor and fairly warm during the cold

Drizzles off my head and from my eyes, it did hold

I have been offered a variety of sandwiches there

And sweet smiles and embraces by my snug caramelized bear

In the Fijian vicinity the British Big Ben would sound

Despite the degree of my insanity, my heart in tranquillity would pound

Last month when I stopped to say ‘hello’, at my mother-in-law’s house

The security guard enquired if I was the ex-owner’s spouse!

I stood speechless as in that relationship; we had no commitment

I then went to my mother’s home and painted it with an imitation ruby and snow, forfeiting a tenderly futile hunt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/6/2018 5:06:00 AM
Excellent poem and great imagination...
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Rohini Balram
Date: 3/6/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thank you for the motivating comment; means a lot coming from such a great poet.
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