My Morning Song

You’re my love song in the morn, my babes in blue.
Dressed in sweet smiles, my blessing of two.
On God's path, I dance along
with whom I belong,
my joyous 
song.
Canorous -
tender souls grow strong,
bright leaves on my tree lifelong, 
my future, my hope, my sunny view.
You’re my love song in the morn, my babes in blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
February 27, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Rhonda, congratulations. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 1:08 AM
Beautiful melody Rhonda,, Congrats on big win!
Haight Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 6:58 PM
So beautifully written, Rhonda, and what could be more lovely to write about than your two sweet boys. I loved reading it! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 2:12 PM
Wonderful invented write, Rhonda, congratulations on your win. 7 Blessings dear friend
May Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Wonderful write Rhonda...congrats on your win
Mandani Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Congrats Rhonda. Nicely done.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 8:22 AM
I'm glad to see you in the top 10.
Nance Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Grats on your great poem and contest placement :) many smiles :)
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 2:16 AM
dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Rhonda, this is so cute. Seeing it again, I wish I had put it higher. soupmail for ya.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 7:08 AM
This is so pretty!
Meade Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 11:04 AM
A lovely song -- not only in the morning but throughout the day into eternity. 7
Sirak Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 7:08 AM
So tender and sweet. Babies definitely brighten any day.
Smith Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 5:26 PM
I really like Rhonda...your my sunny view..love that line...hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 4:16 PM
This is delightful Rhonda - good luck with the contest - i just have my middle word and first and last lines so far lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 5:23 PM
It is VERY challenging Rhonda hence the reason I have got so far with it ... not lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 5:16 PM
I changed it and it's still wrong...I'm making this much more difficult than it should be!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Thanks, Jan...I had to change it again. My c line's rhyme was wrong...another toughie! hugs, Rhonda
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