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My life here on earth
Spreading out for all to see
In my poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/11/2012 8:48:00 PM
Nicely done... wonderful senryu!
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:26:00 PM
My sentiments exactly! What better way to express one's self through the wonders of poetry! Nicely written!....Milt
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Date: 1/10/2012 12:21:00 PM
What a sweet piece, Carol. Hope you're healing fast
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Date: 1/10/2012 10:48:00 AM
A little gem from you Carol.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.Much appreciated.
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Date: 1/10/2012 6:17:00 AM
just beautiful. thanks for sharing your life and poetry with us :)
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Date: 1/6/2012 10:31:00 PM
I somehow missed this little gem, Carol. Jut lovely.
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Date: 1/6/2012 5:50:00 AM
I love this. It says much in a few words about how we write our lives to inspire others... Just beautiful. Take care, Janet
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Date: 1/5/2012 5:07:00 PM
words that have some meaning, to find them have to search, and string em all together, does leave me in the lurch, sometimes...
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Date: 1/5/2012 10:43:00 AM
Great that you shared this thought with us..My poetry is some version of the truth sometimes so to speak..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting.May this be your richest gift year...Sara
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:48:00 AM
Lovely written Senryu, dear Carol, keep your pen flowing and have a great New Year!...Love, Gert
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Date: 12/25/2011 7:52:00 PM
that's right. your words hold the truth.
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Date: 12/24/2011 9:18:00 PM
nice nice.. you BETTERbe enjoying the holidays... always..xox...p.d.
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Date: 12/22/2011 8:37:00 AM
That poetry by which we live! Keep it up! Peace and Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/22/2011 6:22:00 AM
Universal thought. Wonderfully you have brought. I respect your dedication. Thanks, bl
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Date: 12/21/2011 3:42:00 PM
an words do say what ere we think, written down in a wink, great words my sweet, may santa come around....
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Date: 12/21/2011 10:30:00 AM
I can relate to this :) Great write.
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Date: 12/21/2011 9:52:00 AM
sweet and simple :) yet so complex ;)
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Date: 12/21/2011 8:30:00 AM
Short and to the point. Poetry for many is an extention of life and life experiences. Thank you for your continued support, it is much appreciated. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a happy new year.
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