My Montage

My life here on earth
Spreading out for all to see
In my poetry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Rc Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 8:48 PM
Nicely done... wonderful senryu!
Toran Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:26 PM
My sentiments exactly! What better way to express one's self through the wonders of poetry! Nicely written!....Milt
Horne Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 12:21 PM
What a sweet piece, Carol. Hope you're healing fast
Poet Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 10:48 AM
A little gem from you Carol.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.Much appreciated.
Susan Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:17 AM
just beautiful. thanks for sharing your life and poetry with us :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 10:31 PM
I somehow missed this little gem, Carol. Jut lovely.
Vick Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 5:50 AM
I love this. It says much in a few words about how we write our lives to inspire others... Just beautiful. Take care, Janet
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 5:07 PM
words that have some meaning, to find them have to search, and string em all together, does leave me in the lurch, sometimes...
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 10:43 AM
Great that you shared this thought with us..My poetry is some version of the truth sometimes so to speak..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting.May this be your richest gift year...Sara
Knop Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:48 AM
Lovely written Senryu, dear Carol, keep your pen flowing and have a great New Year!...Love, Gert
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December 25, 2011 at 7:52 PM
that's right. your words hold the truth.
A   Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 9:18 PM
nice nice.. you BETTERbe enjoying the holidays... always..xox...p.d.
Anish Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 8:37 AM
That poetry by which we live! Keep it up! Peace and Love Matthew Anish
Devnath  Avatar
December 22, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Universal thought. Wonderfully you have brought. I respect your dedication. Thanks, bl
Johnson Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 3:42 PM
an words do say what ere we think, written down in a wink, great words my sweet, may santa come around....
Hinson Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 10:30 AM
I can relate to this :) Great write.
Castro Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 9:52 AM
sweet and simple :) yet so complex ;)
Squyres Avatar
December 21, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Short and to the point. Poetry for many is an extention of life and life experiences. Thank you for your continued support, it is much appreciated. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a happy new year.
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