My Mom

I'll tell you a story One of love and loss It will make you see That I miss my Mommy As I recall my happy past I shed a tear for the one I lost Swim in the sweet memory In my heart Mom , you will always be So shine your loving light Down on this sore heart of mine So when I look up at night I'll know you are fine Don't be afraid my son I'm watching you from afar One day you will come To join me on this star Brandon Harvey 31-10-2014

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Milton Toran

Date: 11/17/2014 2:45:00 PM

A touching tribute to your mother. I know the feeling, my mom passed away nearly 20 years ago and it hurts to this very day. My condolences to you. Congratulations on your featured writing!...Milt

Brandon Harvey
Date: 7/25/2016 10:18:00 AM

Thanks Milton

Mama Bear

Date: 11/5/2014 5:58:00 AM

What a great tribute. Just remember Mom is in a better place with no more pain. God loves you and her. Blessings Edith

Brandon Harvey
Date: 11/5/2014 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Edith .... She will live on in my heart . hugs Brandon xx

BE Bailey

Date: 11/5/2014 5:03:00 AM

This is so beautiful Brandon. Truly a touching piece. I lost my Father three years ago and I can relate to how you must be feeling. That feeling of if only God can send them down just for 1 day. Stay Strong and remember, one day we will meet our loved ones again. Take care "B"

Brandon Harvey
Date: 11/5/2014 8:13:00 AM

Thank you kindly for your warm words . hugs Brandon xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/3/2014 9:44:00 PM

I am so sorry for your loss, Brandon. I can relate to your grief because years ago I lost my son to illness. Welcome to the Soup site. Blessings, Darlene

Brandon Harvey
Date: 11/4/2014 1:22:00 AM

Many thanks Darlene and sorry to hear of your loss . hugs B xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/3/2014 9:43:00 PM

I am so sorry for your loss, Brandon. I can relate to your grief because years ago I lost my son to illness. Welcome to the Soup site. Blessings, Darlene

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2014 5:48:00 PM

what a beautiful tribute poem - she will always live on in your memories and in your heart:-) hugs jan xx

Brandon Harvey
Date: 11/4/2014 1:25:00 AM

Thank you kindly Jan , hugs B xx