My Miss You Note

My thoughts idling in a deep
dilemma of feelings and
fear, like a land dry in drought,
I start to crack, and I
stop to hope.

My longing for water 
continues for seasons,
a mirage: a hallucination 
of water far far away from
my thirst

while portraits of memories moist
my thoughts, they separate my fear
from feelings. They make me miss...you 
again!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 28, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Romeo, Awesome first post, You must be an accomplished writer. Hope to see you FLOURISH among this rock solid community of amateur poets. You are going to love it here. Fast;) Linda
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June 28, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Wow, I just Read Aarons (ye) write about missing a certain gal. I'm extremely excited to read two poems about longing from new poets back to back. Makes it easier to understand the pain. A perfect 7 rant. I love everything about the write .skat
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