My Mind At Play 2-22-10

i keep thinking that i smell your skin, 
its wafting through my memories, 
taunting me to pull you close, 
but your sitting at home, 
i breath in deep, 
hoping it doesnt fade, 
wondering why my minds at play, 
all i know is i smell your skin, 
and im missing the feel and the look of it...
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Gumbo Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 8:17 AM
Wonderful, loving, well done! :))
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Cool little poem. Sensual!
Nelson Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 2:26 PM
embracing me by the pen, i feel a bit seduced
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February 22, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem today .CAN NOT wait to read your abused poem..Thank you for your comment..irma
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