The Situation Poet I do not know?

My Message In the Bottle

i have given just about all that i could give
as a poet through this one page i live
one last line for you dear reader
read it carefully and you will
find that my treasures
are forever mine
not material
but found
in my
lines

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Keith Bickerstaffe May 19, 2012 at 8:58 AM Almost an ETHEREE... I love the uninterrupted flow from line to line. The pride you feel is palpable!! Well done, my friend.

Dinda Minardi February 2, 2012 at 8:02 AM Every poet's words are one's precious treasure... Agreed, The Situation.

Elizabeth Wesley January 15, 2012 at 8:30 AM You always have a treasure to find in your lines. Love to read and absorb some of your depths my friend. :)

John Loving Iii August 8, 2011 at 8:18 PM and you can keep up too. jhl

Leonard Taormina April 10, 2011 at 6:02 PM excellent write and my thanks to you for it

Phyllis Babcock March 6, 2011 at 2:17 PM Glad to have read your message in the bottle poem. Good luck in the contest. God Bless Phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown March 4, 2011 at 11:23 AM The weekend is here and I am trying to get some poetry read. I am glad you had something new here for me to enjoy today T.S. I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2011 at 7:53 AM Very nicely put. Go reread the contest though. YOu have to do certain things to place! (read it carefully)

Carolyn Devonshire March 3, 2011 at 4:48 PM Quite a profound approach to the contest, T.S. I think you'll do well with this unique approach. Enjoyed very much! (I wasn't the "class clown," just weird.) Love, Carolyn