My Major

My major pain
two bit wit turned
switched
                         My major
                         bent over twisted
                         stained rained
                         betrayed is frayed
                         lame
My major lure
pure to endure
denial so
smile

angsti do not know?

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Beata Agustin

July 15, 2026 at 2:42 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

March 25, 2016 at 2:14 PM

Carol,,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

July 28, 2015 at 10:32 PM

Carol, I enjoyed reading your poem today. Take Care. **SKAT**

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 17, 2009 at 5:30 AM

Thank you for starting my week out with some excellent reading Carol. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

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