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My Maiko

Written: June 14, 2023

A Brian Strand Premiere No 1223 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand


Floating like steam from oolong tea, speaking words that do delight. Your gown of silk glides so effortlessly within my visual sight. My arms like chopsticks holding ~ ~ delicacies appease ^ ^ my appetite. Sweet '' yet hot upon * * my ) ( ) ) ( ( tongue all my senses you ignite!
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Hind Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 1:47 PM
This is so romantic and passionate! Wonderful work!
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 1:08 PM
I think you may get another win with one like this. So nice, Sotto.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 2:30 AM
Lovely shape and poem.
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