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Written: June 14, 2023 A Brian Strand Premiere No 1223 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Floating like steam from oolong tea, speaking words that do delight. Your gown of silk glides so effortlessly within my visual sight. My arms like chopsticks holding ~ ~ delicacies appease ^ ^ my appetite. Sweet '' yet hot upon * * my ) ( ) ) ( ( tongue all my senses you ignite!

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Date: 6/15/2023 1:47:00 PM
This is so romantic and passionate! Wonderful work!
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Date: 6/15/2023 1:08:00 PM
I think you may get another win with one like this. So nice, Sotto.
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Date: 6/15/2023 2:30:00 AM
Lovely shape and poem.
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