Afzal Nusker Poet Quintain (English)

My Magical Nights

I lay in bed by the window side at night,
gazing into the gleaming eyes of enchantress - the moon.
She casts a spell of sweet dreams with her shimmering light
and a serene slumber enshrouds me, a magical boon.
A world full of colorful fantasies come to life and I swoon.


Date: 08/06/2017

Note: For the contest ( English Quintain ) by Sara Kendrick.
          *Placed Eighth*

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Silent One September 23, 2017 at 5:20 AM Enchanting sensual write... Just 8th?

Alexis Y. August 23, 2017 at 9:50 AM Hi Afzal, I'm so glad I found this beauty this morning. And it was "a magical night indeed". Congrats on your win. Well done:-) Alexis Afzal Nusker August 30, 2017 at 1:43 AM Thank you, Alexis.

Sara Kendrick August 14, 2017 at 5:23 PM I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..Good to have colorful dreams...Congrats on your placement..Sara Afzal Nusker August 16, 2017 at 12:45 AM Thank you very much, Sara.

Afolabi Muideen August 14, 2017 at 2:27 AM What a beautiful post here. thanks for sharing. Good luck within. Afzal Nusker August 16, 2017 at 12:44 AM Thank you, Afolabi.

Freddie Robinson Jr. August 12, 2017 at 10:45 AM A wonderful melange of moonlight images, Afzal. Very fine Quintain poetry.Only a talented can use the word enshroud in a poem ... and it brings more expressiveness to the poem itself. Wonderful write, my friend. Love always. Afzal Nusker August 13, 2017 at 12:48 AM Thank you very much for such a kind compliment, Freddie.

Alesia Leach August 11, 2017 at 5:51 PM Sweet! Love the night! Congrats!! Afzal Nusker August 13, 2017 at 12:48 AM Thank you, Alesia.

Janice Canerdy August 9, 2017 at 10:02 AM Lovely, descriptive poem, Afzal! Janice Afzal Nusker August 10, 2017 at 5:07 AM Thank you, Janice.

Ralph Sergi August 8, 2017 at 7:43 PM A simple but flowing poem that espouses the moon as a Magical Sandman. Great Write! Afzal Nusker August 8, 2017 at 11:19 PM Thank you very much, Ralph.

Joanna Daniel August 7, 2017 at 10:26 AM Such a nice picture, Afzal:) P.s. The first line, it is 'window' side right? Afzal Nusker August 7, 2017 at 11:54 AM Thanks a lot for the correction, Jo.

Probir Gupta August 7, 2017 at 6:27 AM Enjoyed reading and feeling the 'serene slumber' ... GL in the contest ... Afzal Nusker August 7, 2017 at 11:54 AM Thank you very much, Probir.

Joseph May August 7, 2017 at 3:03 AM An enchanting write Afzal....GL in the contest.. Afzal Nusker August 7, 2017 at 11:53 AM Thank you, Joseph.

Maria Williams August 6, 2017 at 5:59 AM by the glow of the moonlight streaming in through the window, I enjoy your lovely words in' My Magical Night'. Good luck in the contest Afzal.....Maria Afzal Nusker August 6, 2017 at 6:53 AM Thank you very much, Maria.