Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

My Magic Unicorn

Before I only knew you in our lesson
                    A legendary beauty that I adorn
          But when I travel to a forested place
I saw you looking at me face to face

                              You are standing under a gigantic tree
                    Glistening like crystals around your body
          An enchanting picture that I want to touch
Oh so beautiful and I love you so much!

                              Can I hold you in my arms for a second?
                    And touch your magically pointed horn?
          It’s a priceless gift I receive on my birthday
I am speechless and I don’t know what to say

                              Your horn is a symbol of purity and grace
                    Sprinkle your healing magic that’s my wish
          To the world of disappointments and emptiness
So that we will live a life full of happiness

                              My unicorn, so white under the moonlight
                    Can I ride with you and I will hold you tight
          If this is a dream I will not open my eyes dear
I will savor the moments with you forever

 
Maria Paz Samelo
10/2/2012

This poem is lovingly and heartily dedicated to my friend PD on her special day. You are the person face to face with the magic unicorn in this simple poem of mine. Hope you will like it. May your birthday be a memorable day because we are here for you…Your PS family. Million hugs and kisses from me… Maria



*2nd Place
*For PD's-Unicorns Contest.
*Written by: Maria Paz Samelo
* October 02, 2012

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Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2012 at 10:59 PM awesome poem and awesome win for it. Congrats, my friend.

Tahera Mannan October 6, 2012 at 12:23 AM Many congrats Maria for this wonderful win.

Francine Roberts October 5, 2012 at 10:52 PM lovely birthday tribute to PD, congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2012 at 1:15 PM Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Maria. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage October 5, 2012 at 9:07 AM Congrats on this lovely poem dedicated to the birthday girl PD. Well done. Lee

Nette Onclaud October 5, 2012 at 9:07 AM well woven, paz... congrats on your greeat win!..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A October 5, 2012 at 7:26 AM Maria. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~

Terry O'Leary October 3, 2012 at 12:10 PM Excellent poem... beautiful gift/tribute... Terry

Poet Destroyer A October 2, 2012 at 9:14 PM Maria, nice nice,,, i love it... thank you very much..... enjoyed stopping by~ ALWAYS~ PD

Poet Destroyer A October 2, 2012 at 9:14 PM thanks for the face to face,, image... xox~pd Bukang Liwayway October 4, 2012 at 11:14 PM ur welcome friend ..a PD-tastic Birthday to you!! hugs!!

Len Gasun October 2, 2012 at 10:35 AM Wow!!! this is a very fantastic and excellent write for our very dear friend, PD my dear Mary. I love it!! She will love it for sure!!! so sweet!! congratulations!!! love and hugs:) norie Bukang Liwayway October 2, 2012 at 10:47 AM thanks dear nore..you too have a great poem to her..good luck and God bless you always. mwuah!! (^_^)