Emile Pinet Poet Triolet

My Loving Man

My heart’s never felt so alive
snuggled close to my loving man.
Held in his arms where passions thrive
my heart’s never felt so alive.
Treated like the queen of the hive
he gives me all the love he can. 
My heart’s never felt so alive
snuggled close to my loving man.

He gives me all the love he can
my heart’s never felt so alive.
With him my happiness began
he gives me all the love he can.
My staunchest friend and biggest fan
he’s the reason my dreams survive.
He gives me all the love he can,
my heart’s never felt so alive.


(Intertwining Triolet)


4/26/2015

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Julia Ward May 19, 2015 at 2:39 PM It's a very gentle triolet served well by the repetition necessary in following the form. A 7 from me, Emile... Julia, :) Emile Pinet May 19, 2015 at 6:09 PM Thanks Julia, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Etienne Lariviere April 27, 2015 at 2:55 PM Poetry as it should be! très beau poème Emile Pinet April 27, 2015 at 8:48 PM Thanks again Etienne, I'm pleased your visit was a pleasurable one. Emile.

Arthur Vaso April 26, 2015 at 5:42 PM Emile, you have style and grace, and this flows onto every line you compose! Emile Pinet April 27, 2015 at 8:53 AM Thanks so much Arthur, what a nice thing to say. Emile.

Charmaine Chircop April 26, 2015 at 2:27 PM An amazing and beautiful love poem Emile Pinet April 27, 2015 at 8:52 AM Thanks Charmaine, I appreciate your support. Emile.

Anna Hopper April 26, 2015 at 12:42 PM I love this! It makes me want to write a triolet! Emile Pinet April 26, 2015 at 2:19 PM Thanks Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.