My Love's Demise

Atrium's veneer was of coagulum 
Of epithets and vague reflexions 
That halted the roue from circulation 
Vengeance was her ultimatum 
  
And thus her demise was the greatest conundrum 
For thine eyes have never seen her evaporation 
Even before, during her creation 
A ratocinator, to have was her desideratum 
  
Covered with stains of preoccupied continuum 
Of dread preterits without explanations 
She was a hoarded wealth kept to her own manifestation 
No one but she was her only molybdenum.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Schmidt  Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Beautiful! I enjoyed the various meanings throughout the poem!
Beaufort Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Seems like there are a lot of mixed feelings over the end of love. We know we have to let others go their own way. Sometimes we get lucky and they stay!
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