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You'll find great Lipton's and greying Earl's Lying in my green beds in a curl In my aroma they flump I tantalize them to jump In my green waters for love to unfurl Gorgeous ladies keep me in a twirl Celebrities hold me up as a priceless pearl With green eyed coquettes I strump In their petalled lips I slump Blinging down curvaceous bellies to swirl I brew secret desires of any girl Mischief in their hearts I cleverly knurl Squeeze me greener I retrump My flavour you'll never dump With green tea lovers my passions uncurl! May 2, 2016 Second Chance # 3 For Broken Wings (Submitted- April 5, 2016 Finalised- April 16, 2016) * Reference to Lipton Green tea & Green Earl Grey tea

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Date: 5/6/2016 12:41:00 PM
Your piece is electrifying and colorful!!! Congrats Balveen, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/4/2016 8:11:00 AM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I enjoyed the read my friend. This was something totally different, most creative....Mike.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Mike!
Date: 5/3/2016 7:49:00 PM
Balveen, congrats on your top win in the contest :)-luloo
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/4/2016 2:47:00 AM
Thanks Luloo!

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