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My Lover, Who Betrayed

My lover has a satan's Pride for he is a devil in disguise.. true to his lord of deceit he is a master of conceit... born to kill, he knows his will I wish to repay his capricious love My heart lies with him in the ocean of desert.. I had a unique likeness for this malicious pervert.... so deep is the wound,the scar in my heart the end is visible, but not the start... the few more hours that i have now I breath like a breathless cow... My innocent love is torned in the darkness like a shining star gleaming out of the hollowness for those who have faced betrayals... Betrayals cut deep wounds.... My apologies...

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Date: 7/9/2011 4:43:00 PM
May forgiveness find your big heart..... tender poetess.
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:37:00 PM
Smriti where have you been hiding? I must say this is a rare pearl in an ocean of poems. No apologies I'm cut to the bone. :-) MORE
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:02:00 PM
ah yes Smirti and we all have faced betrayal at some point in romance.. u have penned a lovely expression of innocence growing up quickly from this experience.. but revenge..comes later down the line.. and believe me..it does come cause what u give is what u get in this life luv..proven fact..wow a wonderful piece..
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