My Lovely Daffodil and I

Wintry weather frosts me here
Thinking of her my lovely daffodil
Memories that long disappear
But it never left me still

One old September still fresh and new
When we both said "I love you"
Funny moment as cool as dew
Now the then one split in two

Looking back is funny fool inside
Smiling while storm ruled my very eyes
Little by little I've realized
That I need to roll the dice

I've asked the winter why oh why
Why such a lovely moment need to fly
But still in my heart, it never says goodbye
The story of my lovely daffodil and I



9/16/2016
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October 25, 2016 at 4:12 AM
- Deeply moving and beautifully written, Frederick - Enjoy reading, great rhyme - I give this poem a 7 - // Anne-Lise :)
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