My Love Worth

They say they want to leave me 
But I feel as if I and they are meant to be
I’m tired of holding them back every time they want to leave
When I try to stich back up the wound 
The stiches seems to get looser and leave me feeling like without them I’m just a loser 
What is it that I have to do to show them how much my love is true?
I did my wrongs so it don’t make me right but who is perfect 
There love is still in my sight 
For I love them and I won’t give up without a fight
But there’s no Lie this love comes back with a strike
I know my love worth is stronger than I and they believe 
But why do we suffer the pain the love brings when all we need to do within each other is to believe
For I know I love you and you love me 
But for sure I know my love is worthy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 16, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Hi Vanessa, came back to see if you posted a new poem. I am waiting to see a new one from you, ~~~ SKAT
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June 14, 2013 at 10:49 PM
This is lovely Vanessa. Stopping by with a sweet smile and a warm Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless.......... Hugs* "SKAT"
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June 14, 2013 at 9:13 PM
Hi Vanessa, a worthy love, and impressive way in expressing it. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
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June 14, 2013 at 4:57 PM
Welcome to poetry soup.I enjoyed perusing your poem.
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June 14, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Light & Love
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June 14, 2013 at 3:02 PM
-A lovely poem, Vanessa. - Thank you - Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Have fun with poetry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 14, 2013 at 3:01 PM
Love, at its core, should never be so complex. Nicely written piece.
Thomas Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Wow!!! I love this poem,,, no doubt love is worthy!!! Thanks for sharing vanessa...lovely write:)
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