My Love My World

Within you I lose myself full of ecstasy and free of earthly pains, Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again. How I wish to be always with you, So that could everyday feel anew. Sooth my weary eyes, By your comely face which to my heart feels nice…… Kiss me and I can make you sense and feel the heavenly stars; Love me and I will give them to you and heal your hearts troubled scars Within you I lose myself full of ecstasy and free of earthly pains, Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again. Blood & heart, Our hearts never do move apart. Heart & pulse, They pulsate heavily and throbbing never dulls. Pulse &soul. Live life loving and blissfully content living our goal. Soul and body After all we have gone through, its pure love that they embody…………………….. Within you I lose myself full of ecstasy and free of earthly pains, Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 10:44 PM
Full of unbridled passion, yet sensitively worded. Your imagery is outstanding, and your phrasing is vivid and compelling. Nicely structured, too! Best wishes, Keith
Prabhu Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 10:58 PM
thank you Keith
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May 17, 2012 at 10:05 PM
Sashi, congratulations in Michael's contest.. Take care and have yourself a good night ~ always* PD
Prabhu Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 10:58 PM
thank you PD
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Congratulations on you win in Michael's "Love" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 11:36 AM
Thank you CAROL
Williams Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 12:52 AM
Sashi congrats on your win..David
Prabhu Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 11:37 AM
thanks David!!
Burch Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Sashi!!How passionately beautiful!! Big Congratulations on your well deserved win my friend!! such a tender heart :) big hugs,love ya deb
Prabhu Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 11:37 AM
thank you DEBORAH!!!
May Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:10 PM
congrats on your win Sashi..
Prabhu Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 11:38 AM
thanks JOSEPH!!!!
May Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:09 PM
congrats on your win Sashi..
Richards Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 5:34 PM
This is so deeply beautiful! Congrats on your win Sashi!
Falotico Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest with this outstanding piece... Michael
Prabhu Avatar
May 19, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Michael !!!!!!!!!!!
Debrosse Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Really moving, excellent writing
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 1:36 PM
Sashi you have a lovely love poem today....must be a lovely lucky lady !!!! Very well written. enjoyed it. - oxox Anne-Lise (Yes, I will be happy to be the first to comments this sweet poem) :)
Prabhu Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 6:34 AM
thanks foe the warm words Anne!!!!!!!
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