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My Love Is Real

my love is real no game laid out for two, this i tell only one for he is the true hero of my heart. for i miss him so and the passion soars among butterflies in my stomach and ills me to the bone each n everyday were apart, come to me, fly with me, hide away with me, we are the tru reason for fate among one another and family shared faith i surely will die. unbarried tombs of gold, you are my diamond in the ruff, A love strongly casted between A sparkling ring of fire that i dare to go. I burn,so burn with me baby for our love can never die out, because i love you so, as i strike this match to A promise of us to love you enternealy to settle for nothing less.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/26/2012 7:14:00 PM
loved it, felt warm,great write Carma,oxoxox
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 8/26/2012 7:22:00 PM
as warm as the winter breeze
Date: 8/15/2012 2:44:00 AM
Love is beautiful.....and that is also your poem Carma. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 8/19/2012 4:13:00 PM
thanks anne-lise for the kind words they are greatly appreciated....... xoxoxox
Date: 8/14/2012 8:11:00 PM
This was a very sweet poem.. But if you look up the form "Acrostic" you will find that it is a word spelled out with phrases coming off each letter to form a poem.. Hope this helps :) cory
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 8/14/2012 8:36:00 PM
thank you cory for the lovely comment, and i will still trying to learn.

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