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My Love For You

Honesty so rare and so true My heart aches for I am not The one who completes you My love so strong and true I'd give everything for you But there's one thing I won't do It breaks my heart to hear that tone That frown upon so heavy and true Will I ever be good enough for you? My heart is breaking My hands are tied My head is spinning My tears are flowing Oh the love I have for you is like no other Why won't you accept my small error For I am who I am so true to you I will forever hold you in my heart Til the end we shall never part

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Date: 2/7/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/25/2016 9:44:00 AM
Nicole, this is so Awesome., Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/14/2016 7:07:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Nicole. :)
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