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My Love For You

Honesty so rare and so true

My heart aches for I am not

The one who completes you 

My love so strong and true 

I'd give everything for you 

But there's one thing I won't do

It breaks my heart to hear that tone 

That frown upon so heavy and true 

Will I ever be good enough for you?

My heart is breaking 

My hands are tied 

My head is spinning 

My tears are flowing 

Oh the love I have for you is like no other 

Why won't you accept my small error 

For I am who I am so true to you 

I will forever hold you in my heart 

Til the end we shall never part

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Beata Agustin

February 7, 2024 at 7:44 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

May 25, 2016 at 9:44 AM

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