Lalit Sharma Poet Rhyme

My Love For You

LOVE AND YOU
I don’t know exactly from 
when
I became your perfect ten
I was your best friend
On you, I was totally depend
You save my life
Which was losting in the dark 
of
wildlife
When all things I pretend
You chanced me of being your
boyfriend
As only because I was 
descend
Now am loving you from my
heart
We can enjoy the whole life 
on a
beautiful cart
But why this time you are 
forcing
me to shower
From my tear
You know how much pain I’d
bear
Cutie Pie!  I have a fear
That you’ll leave me alone 
next
year
We can be a perfect pair, 
I swear
The whole life we can share
Without any fear
Please never cheat
Otherwise my heart will 
refuses
to beat.
Today I would be sad
But only coz of you, am glad
In your love am totally mad
It’s you, what today I’d
I promise
I’ll never make you sad.

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Dr.Ram Mehta May 28, 2014 at 6:08 AM Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2014 at 1:41 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lalit :) - I choose your first beautiful written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Hyler May 22, 2014 at 11:17 AM Thank you for sharing :)

Skat A May 21, 2014 at 11:10 PM Lalit, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Diane Christian May 21, 2014 at 2:46 PM a beautiful poem, and welcome to poetry soup look forward to reading more of your work and sharing.

Faye Gibson May 21, 2014 at 2:43 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup, Lalit. Keep writing and posting your poems.. I hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A May 21, 2014 at 2:07 PM Lalit, nice ending promise..that's the way love should be... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@