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My Love For You

LOVE AND YOU I don’t know exactly from when I became your perfect ten I was your best friend On you, I was totally depend You save my life Which was losting in the dark of wildlife When all things I pretend You chanced me of being your boyfriend As only because I was descend Now am loving you from my heart We can enjoy the whole life on a beautiful cart But why this time you are forcing me to shower From my tear You know how much pain I’d bear Cutie Pie! I have a fear That you’ll leave me alone next year We can be a perfect pair, I swear The whole life we can share Without any fear Please never cheat Otherwise my heart will refuses to beat. Today I would be sad But only coz of you, am glad In your love am totally mad It’s you, what today I’d I promise I’ll never make you sad.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 6:08:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2014 1:41:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lalit :) - I choose your first beautiful written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Hyler

Date: 5/22/2014 11:17:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :)

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2014 11:10:00 PM

Lalit, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Diane Christian

Date: 5/21/2014 2:46:00 PM

a beautiful poem, and welcome to poetry soup look forward to reading more of your work and sharing.

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/21/2014 2:43:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Lalit. Keep writing and posting your poems.. I hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2014 2:07:00 PM

Lalit, nice ending promise..that's the way love should be... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@