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My Love

( MY LOVE ) Master, Master Where have you gone? I wait for you From dusk to dawn Master, Master You're not on the train I sit here and wait In sun and rain Master, Master They told me you died I'm still waiting I'm sure they lie Master, Master I'm covered in snow But still I wait I cannot go

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Date: 11/14/2014 9:56:00 AM
Another excellent write, I love your take on LOVE in this poem.
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/15/2014 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Maurice. very nice of you
Date: 11/13/2014 11:20:00 AM
Good write Jasmine! :)
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/13/2014 8:49:00 PM
Thanks Ken. have a great day
Date: 11/13/2014 4:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this piece Jasmine. I really love your work. Hope all is well on your side. Have a lovely day "B"
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/13/2014 8:51:00 PM
Thanks b. I appreciate it. Things going good on my side

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