My Love

Good-Bye my sweet  --   LOVE.
            I only have; ---   POETRY.
                  Take it ----     FOREVER.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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December 22, 2011 at 8:31 PM
She cherishes everyone of them, Harry! As do I and many others! This is such a sweet, heartfelt one. it seems you were just blooming with haikus at this point in time. Always, Laura
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February 10, 2010 at 10:44 AM
HG, I love this one! It follows the form perfectly! Each line has one capitalized end word. (There are no end words without lines. And there are no lines without end words.) The horizontal reading is lovely. And the vertical reading of the end words is beautiful as well. Nice one! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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