My Love

Mending the heart, giving more than you receive,
Your love is my light on the darkest of eves.

Love is kind, glowing pure in an unfailing blue
Ocean rising eternal, unconditional and true.
Victorious, uniting, born of selfless deeds,
Ebullient and patient, your love's all I need.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/8/2012 10:24:00 PM
sounds like you have that love, wonderful. If everyone could be so lucky. Really enjoyed this. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee
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Date: 9/7/2012 2:31:00 PM
This is awesome,Rhonda...Wonderful and interesting piece..Great job..Congrats on your win..And thanks for stopping by...
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Date: 9/6/2012 9:05:00 AM
congrat Rhonda on a great win with lovely words defining love .. luv ..
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Date: 9/6/2012 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda xx
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:12:00 PM
Rhonda, , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd
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Date: 9/5/2012 4:01:00 PM
Outstanding definition on love! Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2012 6:06:00 PM
RHONDA, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT
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Date: 9/3/2012 8:47:00 AM
That's a beautiful and romantic poem,nice rhyme, I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 9/2/2012 1:53:00 PM
Wow so many AMEN poems this afternoon..good one! Light & Love
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Date: 9/2/2012 12:17:00 PM
very flowing indeed. beautifully written...~Cindy~
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Date: 9/2/2012 9:31:00 AM
The beauty of this write it truly astounding my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity and great rhyming that you have achieved within this incredible poem! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/1/2012 11:54:00 PM
I like it. :) It's very sweet
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