My Love

My love, my life. Like wine, we age. Our love, grows strong. I write, this poem. To death, we part. M.Mahauariki © 2012
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Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Murry, these are lovely as lines of a Valentine. If you want to win the contest, you will need to make each one rhyme: such as "Like wine, it's fine" something like that. Good luck! andrea
Mahauariki Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 12:04 AM
thank you for pointing that out. This is a new form for me... Muzz
Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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