My Love

My oath is to love you, the same way you love me
you are my all, my everything, my entrusted desire
the hope in me, the prize of my heart
a devoted that existed from the start
that will be forever and not the past
the girl of my heart, the future of my life
loving you I must and I will, for this dedicated love to remain still
to make the smile in your fufill

Though I maybe futile in my speech
I will not be incompetent to murmur how I feel
that my committed love is tightened for you in seal
an everlasting that is worthwhile,
will enlighten my love for you in a pure-hearted smile.

Demeter Edwards
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 9, 2011 at 10:36 AM
* “Owww * I Myself Harbor A Love Such As This * My Dear Precious Demeter * I Too, Shall Not Keep It At Bay * Cloaked Amid But A Shadowed Day * Let It Never Be Sooo, Rather * Cast It Into Their Heart * My Love At Their Feet * Beauty Once More My Dear * Luv Always * Sarah.” *
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