My Love

one vow
one order
one blow
here inexorable from you
my love

show me the way
with chains 
these shackles so cold
and passionate
my love

you promised
and here we are
together forever 
'til death do us part'
my love

it's been such a long time
since i paid for your mistakes
do you see us there?
smiling
my love

you thought you got away
but here we are again! 
no running! besides;
this knife is so sweet
my love


R.Thomas '10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Hey Ryan! Excellent piece of work, though dark, sometimes that's reality. Enjoyed reading this. Your talent speaks, guy! Will read more along the way. Welcome to PS and the more you read and leave comments, enter contests, your poems will get read and points will grow! Let me introduce you to another poet whose work you might enjoy: Jimmy Anderson..Have a good day, Ryan. Peace, love, Audrey
Malmstrom Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Well written; dark, but well written! -Laura
Thomas Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:27 PM
thank you very much! i really appreciate it!
A   Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:26 PM
lol cool and sweet loving write,, enjoyed this one...P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...
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