My Love

Thoughts of him really make me cry. I loved him from the very start. The sad memories make me sigh. He is the one that broke my heart. My love is lasting forever. Very lonely while we're apart. Never wanting to hear never. He is the one that broke my heart. Not fighting with him anymore. My sorrow is a deadly dart. Without him my heart is just sore. He is the one that broke my heart.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2010 7:15:00 PM

sad and strong write, keep your head up and enjoye life

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2010 9:50:00 AM

I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Megan. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/21/2010 5:24:00 AM

This is excellent. The rhyming pattern is great. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/21/2010 4:08:00 AM

In time all wounds heal my love.. welcome to soup and very good write

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2010 3:56:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Megan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/21/2010 3:13:00 AM

Sad but very well written poem, hope your heart mends.