My Love

My love is like a rain drop
a gentle flowing tear 
that falls into a river 
a river without fear

you can not stop a river
from reaching out to sea 
you can not stop the love
the love inside of me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 8:52 PM
this is short and sweet and really beautiful. one of my favorites on the winners list. Congrats.
Oyewole Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 1:47 PM
A Beautiful and lovely quill! One of my favorites in this contest!! Congrats on the win!!!
Sirak Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:29 AM
Soft, yet with steely determination. Congrats on your win, Bernard
Kayode Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Bernard.
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:54 AM
- Hello Bernard, congratulations on your lovely winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:31 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, bernard
Falotico Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 6:54 AM
Very Nice...enjoyable read
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