My Love

My Love, Rachel



Your skin glows like the flower, blossoms fascinating as the rose in the purest hope of spring.
My yearning heart rises to your melodic voice and leaps like a rabbit at the whisper of your 
name, Rachel.
The evening ascends in on a great sparrow wing.
I am calmed by your coat that I carry into the twilight of lovebeams and hold next to my 
heart. 
I am filled with hope that I may dry your tears of regret. 
As my finger falls from my scarf, it reminds me of your warmth. 
In the hushed, I listen for the last sound of the spring.
My heated gaze leaps to my skies. I wait in the crystal moonlight for your secret song so 
that we may love as one, gaze to gaze, in search of the glorious bright and spiritual 
threshold of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 7, 2012 at 5:08 PM
A wonderful tribute Jay! Beautiful:)
R Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 1:38 PM
awe im sure this poem was intended to be read by Racheal maybe your girlfriend
Chircop Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 3:06 PM
Beautiful indeed..Charma
Summers Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 1:35 PM
a deep and beautiful tribute. really great write James
Bourner Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 1:39 PM
beautiful!!! you really must show this to her! it is so powerfully emotional! keep it up! ------Ell
Loveless Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Very lucky girl. Great write.
Sings Avatar
January 9, 2010 at 11:04 AM
I agree with rain this girl is very extremely lucky to have a guy like you. Your seem really nice. I hope you have love always, Brittany
Brown Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today James. May your writing take you to new heights each and every day. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2010 at 11:26 AM
:) i think u will be married some day. lol with a heart like that u will want to :P
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