My Love

your blue eyes
flown with cries
here i am here
to help my dear
you will be safe
in my arms hate
the fact you know
it is true i can't go
my heart is broken
the  truth will be spoken
i will always always love you
forever wanting to be true
however far you may fall
just know that i will stand tall
against the pouring rain
and all the grief and pain
just to be by your side
my tears will hide
you will some day see
who you truly are to be
for now my love
think above
of all faults and hurt
i will always for sure
never let you go alone
how ever far from home
you may be 
i will come and set you free
My love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 28, 2009 at 9:22 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this, as I understand what you may have been feeling when writing this. I think one thing you could work on is your grammar, and the way you write, as it, punctuation, capitalization. If you can improve on this I believe that your writing will have greater effect. Good luck honey, keep up the good work. Casper
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September 27, 2009 at 4:34 PM
beautiful, heart warmiing but sad. keep it going!----Ell
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