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My Love

your blue eyes flown with cries here i am here to help my dear you will be safe in my arms hate the fact you know it is true i can't go my heart is broken the truth will be spoken i will always always love you forever wanting to be true however far you may fall just know that i will stand tall against the pouring rain and all the grief and pain just to be by your side my tears will hide you will some day see who you truly are to be for now my love think above of all faults and hurt i will always for sure never let you go alone how ever far from home you may be i will come and set you free My love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/28/2009 9:22:00 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this, as I understand what you may have been feeling when writing this. I think one thing you could work on is your grammar, and the way you write, as it, punctuation, capitalization. If you can improve on this I believe that your writing will have greater effect. Good luck honey, keep up the good work. Casper
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Date: 9/27/2009 4:34:00 PM
beautiful, heart warmiing but sad. keep it going!----Ell
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