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My Lost Romeo

MY LOST ROMEO You're my only love And I call you my love You are my Romeo And my inamorato I feel so captivated To be loved by you All I ever wanted Was to be with you And finally will you marry me You asked me Yes I will marry you And live my lifetime with you I gave you wholly I loved you unconditionally I gave you totally I loved you solely Everything happened so fast Present turned into past It was not meant to last It just needed to past You became cold it was rust not gold Beautiful memoirs turned spoiled as mold Not even our friendship was saved You just turned your back and faded Tears left falling Never heard my heart's aching Leaving without talking Your heart's not beating Into the bliss fading Into the dark not worth remembering Goodbye to you my Romeo And my inamorato @Copyright Meline C. Ngo August 25, 2015

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Date: 10/25/2015 3:35:00 PM
congrats SK
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Date: 10/22/2015 5:40:00 PM
Meline, Thank you for supporting my contest... CONGRATULATIONS for a well-deserved win!!! :O)) _Aiyah
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Date: 10/22/2015 1:40:00 PM
Meline, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:51:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Meline!
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Meline Ngo
Date: 9/28/2015 1:14:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma, my second win =)
Date: 9/27/2015 10:18:00 AM
Meline, you have penned a sad heartfelt piece. Sometimes forever is not written in the stars, but stay hopeful that you will meet another. Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-) Alexis. P.S. Welcome to Poetry Soup
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Meline Ngo
Date: 9/28/2015 1:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Alexis. This was my very first poem that I wrote in my whole entire life which led me into writing more poems. Thanks again.
Date: 8/30/2015 6:08:00 PM
It's sad but it happens to many of us, told of being loved and then at the end being left hurt, betrayed and forsaken.
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Meline Ngo
Date: 8/31/2015 5:56:00 AM
very true and it is very sad and live us really broken. thank you for stopping by.
Date: 8/27/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thank you for the comment on my reply... LINDA
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Date: 8/26/2015 1:12:00 PM
Meline, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Meline Ngo
Date: 8/27/2015 3:20:00 AM
Thank you Linda :)
Date: 8/23/2015 11:06:00 PM
Meline, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Meline Ngo
Date: 8/24/2015 12:27:00 AM
Thank you very much. I'm not a professional poet and I was really surprised when I was asked to choose a category. "My Lost Romeo" is my very first poem that I wrote. Then I started writing more. Thank you for the warm welcome.

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