My Loss

Oh, how I love that Jamaican rum! In my coffee, it is pure yum. In cake it’s even better; My roommate loves it too. He swilled mine away, Now it’s all gone; No rum cake, To dine On.
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:21 PM
My roommate and I rarely eat or drink the same items. I like the way you typed this into an inverted diamond, M.L.
Kiser Avatar
January 12, 2019 at 5:48 AM
Thanks again.
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 10:54 AM
Lovely shape. Stunning, ML.
Kiser Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Oh, thank you; the shape just happened although, good rum needs a good cork.
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