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Oh, how I love that Jamaican rum! In my coffee, it is pure yum. In cake it’s even better; My roommate loves it too. He swilled mine away, Now it’s all gone; No rum cake, To dine On.

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Date: 1/10/2019 7:21:00 PM
My roommate and I rarely eat or drink the same items. I like the way you typed this into an inverted diamond, M.L.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/12/2019 5:48:00 AM
Thanks again.
Date: 1/9/2019 10:54:00 AM
Lovely shape. Stunning, ML.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/10/2019 7:37:00 AM
Oh, thank you; the shape just happened although, good rum needs a good cork.

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