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My Lord

This world can be a hard cold place, a place I do not want to embrace. Some do fall from all that is not true, some will not finish the race. Life is full of good and bad, some days I have had both and that was sad. My Lord you were the only one I can run to, "the world was on fire, no one could save me but you." Date Written: 2/20/2020 I used this in the last line. "The world was on fire, no one could save me but you" - Chris Isaak - Wicked Game 3 Place Famous poetic lines 3 - Love songs. Contest Judged: 2/23/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 2/24/2020 9:32:00 AM
Fine write Paula, good imagery and insightful thought too. Blessings,Gordon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2020 10:40:00 AM
Thank You, for reading, writing and your kind words. Glad you like it. Blessings to you...........
Date: 2/23/2020 7:48:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2020 10:13:00 AM
Thank You so much. It was so nice for you to write. Enjoy your day with hugs..................
Date: 2/23/2020 6:47:00 AM
a nice spiritual take on the lyric.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2020 10:11:00 AM
What a surprise from you. I did not know I had a win. Thank You, for you note. Glad you like it. Have a great day................
Date: 2/20/2020 7:33:00 PM
A nice prayer to start the day Paula, you're right though, the world can be cold and cruel at times Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/21/2020 1:35:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. A prayer??? I never thought of that. I love to hear from the writers. Enjoy your day..........
Date: 2/20/2020 6:41:00 PM
Writes the Angel of YOU...Nice one
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/21/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thank You, for your note and kind words. Have a wonderful day.................

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