Carol Mitra Poet Rhyme

My Little Paper Plane

I caught the sun rays
On the wings of my little paper plane
A golden light with utter delight
Trapped in games and lost its light
The sight to see belongs to the sun
Not even to the waves of my little paper fun
Dipping and diving along the way
As the waves on the wings of my plane sway
And so does the light, struggling 
to survive and fight today
This trapped soul of a golden ray
Seeks freedom from the clutches of display
A ray riding on a little paper plane, play.




29.03.2021
Sponsor: Brian Strand
All yours (March 29) First Place

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Malabika Ray Choudhury April 2, 2021 at 4:01 PM Beautiful poem, Carol! really enjoyed. Congratulations on your win. Carol Mitra April 2, 2021 at 8:03 PM Thanks dear Malabika...much love take care :)

Sam Kauffman March 30, 2021 at 9:59 AM Nicely done indeed, Carol. You took a simple object - a paper airplane - and turned it into poetic subject matter and theme! Congratulations on your win. Like Gordon, I enjoyed the flow of your words - like the wind catching your "little paper airplane." Blessings! Carol Mitra March 30, 2021 at 9:43 PM Thanks dear Sam....I loved doing this as a child and actually would get angry with the rays of the sun....ha ha...my brothers would laugh at me....but that's me....Im glad you enjoyed it...much love, take care :)

Gordon Mcconnell March 28, 2021 at 12:23 PM A lovely little piece Carol, with nice rhyme and flow too. Take care Gordon Carol Mitra March 28, 2021 at 6:07 PM Thanks dear Gordon...Best wishes...you too take care :)