Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

My Little Girl

Shadow's my little girl
appropriately named for her ebony fur:
my black pearl.

A lazy cat
sleeping all day, she tends to purr:
she's fat.

She's slow:
yet, I love her
so.

Shadow's my little girl,
sleeping all day, she tends to purr
so.

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Christuraj Alex April 4, 2022 at 5:29 AM Beautiful minichu on black cat. Congratulations! Emile Pinet April 4, 2022 at 6:29 AM Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Terry Miller April 4, 2022 at 1:35 AM Beautifully written Emile. Emile Pinet April 4, 2022 at 6:29 AM Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins May 10, 2021 at 2:32 PM A beautiful black cat. I can see how you love her very much. Your poem is a sweet tribute. It flows so nicely..."so" Emile Pinet May 10, 2021 at 7:23 PM Thanks Milt, you never fail to please me with your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2021 at 2:17 PM I like how your sentences flow and are very well written. I had a black cat too. She died a few years ago. Congrats to you. Emile Pinet May 10, 2021 at 2:27 PM Thanks Andrea, my Little Girl is going on 16 now and is still just as playful as the kitten she was years back... or at least I like to think so; your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex May 9, 2021 at 5:32 AM Beautifully said. Congratulations! Emile Pinet May 9, 2021 at 7:47 AM Thanks Christuraj, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.

Virginia Gelok April 21, 2021 at 6:12 PM I want to write like this...just have to understand this poetry language, rhyme scheme and syllable count etc. this poem helped me understand a bit more. Good luck in the contest. Emile Pinet April 21, 2021 at 7:07 PM Thanks Virginia, you have talent, experience will be your teacher, just keep writing and it will happen my friend, Emile.