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My Little Girl

Shadow's my little girl
appropriately named for her ebony fur,
my black pearl.

A lazy cat
sleeping all day, she tends to purr,
she's fat.

She's slow,
but I love her
so.

Shadow's my little girl,
sleeping all day, she tends to purr
so.


(Minichu)


4/16/2021


A Pet Minichu Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2021

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Christuraj Alex Date: 4/4/2022 5:29:00 AM Beautiful minichu on black cat. Congratulations! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 4/4/2022 6:29:00 AM Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Terry Miller Date: 4/4/2022 1:35:00 AM Beautifully written Emile. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 4/4/2022 6:29:00 AM Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins Date: 5/10/2021 2:32:00 PM A beautiful black cat. I can see how you love her very much. Your poem is a sweet tribute. It flows so nicely..."so" Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/10/2021 7:23:00 PM Thanks Milt, you never fail to please me with your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/10/2021 2:17:00 PM I like how your sentences flow and are very well written. I had a black cat too. She died a few years ago. Congrats to you. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/10/2021 2:27:00 PM Thanks Andrea, my Little Girl is going on 16 now and is still just as playful as the kitten she was years back... or at least I like to think so; your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex Date: 5/9/2021 5:32:00 AM Beautifully said. Congratulations! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 5/9/2021 7:47:00 AM Thanks Christuraj, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.

Virginia Gelok Date: 4/21/2021 6:12:00 PM I want to write like this...just have to understand this poetry language, rhyme scheme and syllable count etc. this poem helped me understand a bit more. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 4/21/2021 7:07:00 PM Thanks Virginia, you have talent, experience will be your teacher, just keep writing and it will happen my friend, Emile.