My Little Carpenter's Serenade

In the tree by my house, 
Lived, a black rumped flameback, with its spouse.
Their oscine songs and undulating flight were my daily delight.

Oh! Today it was flicking the rear-view mirror of my car,
May be, it found another song bird inside.
Jabbing and drilling to play or may be, to fight.
Or maybe, those unique rolls and the cadence were to impress the new bride.
Whatever! Its drumming was like a song of a passerine.

Just then the carcass of its partner lay in front of my sight.
Gut-wrenching was the plight of this speechless red hooded flight.
How do I tell it, that its solitude would never subside?
 Yet, its spouse is in, there inside and that’s a great respite.

17th February 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kulkarni Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 11:02 AM
What a beautiful poem Aditi! Loved reading it! -Smita
Dhaka Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 12:54 AM
Thank you:)
Laurie Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 7:46 PM
G'day aditi … I do enjoy poems based on nature, even when sadness occurs as in yours. However, a bird attacking its own reflection brought back memories to me - thank you aditi - Lindsay
Dhaka Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 8:10 AM
Thank You:) there's actually a wood pecker, drilling the glass every day. it is my darling.... very very cute.
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February 17, 2019 at 11:58 AM
A wonderful poem with a heartfelt concern for a bird who will soon be in grieving.
Dhaka Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 12:24 AM
Thank you so much for taking out time to read my poem. Your appreciation has really motivated me.
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