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My Lips Are Sewn

My lips are sewn- for silence is all I've ever known, and all I was ever shown- so to this habit, I too, became prone; a habit that thrives, though I have grown. My desires and goals shaded by a heart, that was once so cold- and continues to unfold, and though I am now told- resentment stays uncontrolled. For as a child, I was undersold; to keep it brief- this soon came to be my belief; that I was in no way unique- and affection, unable to receive, a thought, that still aggrieves- everything inside of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/22/2014 6:58:00 PM
truly poignant and the message sinks deep into my soul..you're excellent in making rhymes..vocabulary entries are just perfect for the wholeness of the poem..
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:05:00 PM
The words from your lips are quite profound. So nice that you can write them. And keep your feet firm on the ground. When troubles do incite them. Peace. :)
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Date: 1/8/2014 11:32:00 AM
That's terrible my heart goes out to you. so good that you can express yourself now through words. It does good to ler things out now and again well done. Pete.
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Date: 1/2/2014 12:05:00 AM
Poignant write Carly! I like how you've captured the ills of subversion - to unlearn what we learn in childhood is never easy but slowly our perception changes as we become more confident in the truth. Very well written.
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Date: 12/29/2013 3:46:00 PM
- A well written poem, Carly. - HAPPY NEW YEAR - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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