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My Lily Cat

My Lily Cat

I miss my dear loving kitty,
You died so young, what a pitty!

I loved to stroke your softest fur, 
To watch you play and hear you purr.

You gave such joy, though unaware
How your sweet spirit helped me bear

The many burdens on my mind,
You shared your loyal love so kind.

Your picture sits upon my shelf
Behind the glass, sunning yourself.

I cried for two months when you left,
Inconsolable and bereft.

My feline friend where are you now?
I pray you'll be reborn somehow.

8-7-18

Cat Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 12:02 AM
O.K. already...you made me cry! Through tears can't say more, except Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 12:51 AM
It is so nice to hear from you Barbara. It is too late to be on the computer tonight as I got up at 5:30 am, but I will visit your poems tomorrow. I had Virus protection problems all day and my husband just got it fixed tonight. Thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. I appreciate your comments very much. : )
Godwin Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 10:16 PM
As a cat lover, I love this poem - it speaks to me and for me. Is this true? Cat from the past? There needn't have been one for you to know these feelings, I realize you know them well, regardless. Very well-written and touching. Love ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 11:14 PM
This is very true. I have Lily's ashes in a sweet decorated tin. One day her ashes will be used to grow flowers. My daughter got Tommy Cat a few months after Lily passed. He was a real charmer! Thank you CayCay. I am a cat lover too. : ) xxoo
Callus Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 11:59 AM
What a lovely tribute to your cat, Connie! It is a pity when pets either die or else get lost; they leave a void which is hard to fill. I always say 'no more', but for each pet that departs I eventually get one or two! Belated congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
Waters Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 12:05 AM
Sadly beautiful story. Yes, they do get reborn, I have some amazing unbelievable proofs of that. Thank you for sharing this story.
Canerdy Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Moving piece, Connie. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Ahh!! Sad winning work. Congrats on your excellent work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Gentry Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Congratulations on your win. Such a warm, heartfelt, well-written poem. I could feel your loss in this, and I'm sorry she is gone. Our pets do become our family. Hugs...
Richards Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Oh Connie, what a dear poem this is! I have loved and lost many kitties in my life, and I know how near and dear they become, and this poem spoke to my heart! So glad you won with this sweet poem.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:48 PM
Thank you Carrie. When I was young, a stray calico cat came to our home. We named her sugar because she was so loving and sweet. I will always remember the joy she gave us. One day she was gone. We think she got hit by a car and we searched but never found her. I am glad I didn't find out she may have been hit. Thank you Carrie.
Hinshaw Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Congrats for your well-deserved win, Connie. Hope you can find another cat to replace her - as someone said in a poem one time,"a home just ain't a home without an inscrutable cat!" I have a dear old cat named Jeff and he is such a wonderful companion especially at this time. He follows me around like a puppy and is lying on the desk as I type this. Best to you - Bob
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:50 PM
That sounds delightful Robert. Our cat used to put his paws on my computer keys while I was trying to type, he would insist on laying in my lap. Thank you very much. : )
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 3:08 PM
So to whom do you complain that your cat did NOT have nine lives? Justice must be served! Congratulations on our win! Aloha! Rico
Gauthier Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Lovely, Connie. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations, Connie. You did better than I did with this contest. I have SO many cat poems. I wish I could have chosen one of my older ones that people have not ever seen back from 2011. haha. Your win was very well deserved.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Thank you Andrea. I miss having a cat now. It is the first time in my life I haven't had a cat. : ) xxoo
Kitchin Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 4:34 AM
A beautiful heart felt poem, congratulations on your win in the contest!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Thank you very much Tania, for your high placement in your contest. This is the first time in my life I haven't had a cat to love. My daughter just got a kitten, so I visit her and play with her cute kitten. : )
Salehi Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:40 PM
I know the feeling...
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 6:22 PM
She is reborn (If I can believe what the 'you know what" says!!) This is lovely and poignant. Is it really her picture here?
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:20 PM
No, but she looked very much like this cat in the picture. Thanks Andrea. : )
Raven Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:23 AM
A wonderful poem written for your kitten friend Connie. The words just draw the reader into the feelings shared. Our animal friends can touch us so deeply that when they go a part of us goes with them. Good luck in the contest Connie. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Doll Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 10:33 AM
So sad, but beautifully composed, Connie. Going into my FAVS, Good luck in the contest. Warren:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Thank you very much Warren.I have always had a cat until a couple years ago. : )
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Almost like loosing a child, so sadly done Connie, best wishes in the contest...
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 9:23 PM
To be greeted at the door when arriving home was so special. I miss her still so much. Thank you Charlie : )
Dutta Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 10:58 PM
Do you still have a pet cat? The picture is cute, really lovable.
Casto Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 1:25 PM
This heartfelt, pensive poem strikes me as I have a cat at home. Moreso, your comment on my work encourages. Thank you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 4:19 PM
You are ever welcome Banjo. Thank you! : )
Warrior Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 8:38 AM
So cute-so cute...lovely write my friend...I love kitties...grew up with several...male and female...love & kittens...^WW^
Bauer Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 8:26 AM
aw, so very sad, connie! beautiful picture, too...
Daniel Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 8:06 AM
This one flows from the heart, Connie, a pet gone is always missed:)
Pandit Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 6:54 AM
A sweet tribute..your love flows in your words..best for a win, Connie.
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