My Life's Breathing Account

Each day breaths withdraw

From my life's breathing account--


My balance...unknown!







© Demetrios Trifiatis 
   11 September 2021

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Vijay Pandit

September 11, 2021 at 6:38 AM

It's best not to know. Live forever, my friend. Beautiful flowers!

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 11, 2021 at 9:11 AM

You are so gracious, my dearest friend , Vijay. Stay safe. Blessings.

John Lawless

September 11, 2021 at 4:59 AM

...YOU SHOULD INQUIRE ABOUT OVERDRAFT PROTECTION....

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 11, 2021 at 9:09 AM

Your comments do justice to your name:LAWLESS!

Sotto Poet

September 11, 2021 at 4:44 AM

Wonderful metaphor, the balance is unknown, and there is no way for a loan. Our breath credit is counted and deposited just once: the day we were born. Thanks for these daily gems, dear Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 11, 2021 at 9:10 AM

Thank you for your meaningful comments, dearest Lasaad. God bless you.