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" LIFE " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of flower and nature

My Life's Breathing Account

Each day breaths withdraw

From my life's breathing account--


My balance...unknown!







© Demetrios Trifiatis 
   11 September 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/11/2021 6:38:00 AM
It's best not to know. Live forever, my friend. Beautiful flowers!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:11:00 AM
You are so gracious, my dearest friend , Vijay. Stay safe. Blessings.
Date: 9/11/2021 4:59:00 AM
...YOU SHOULD INQUIRE ABOUT OVERDRAFT PROTECTION....
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:09:00 AM
Your comments do justice to your name:LAWLESS!
Date: 9/11/2021 4:44:00 AM
Wonderful metaphor, the balance is unknown, and there is no way for a loan. Our breath credit is counted and deposited just once: the day we were born. Thanks for these daily gems, dear Demetrios.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for your meaningful comments, dearest Lasaad. God bless you.
Date: 9/10/2021 11:24:00 PM
So true Demetrios, I hope your account gain lots of interest. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:10:00 AM
Thank you my dearest friend, Tom. Have a wonderful weekend.
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