My Life's Breathing Account

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" LIFE " MY PHOTO, ©

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Each day breaths withdraw From my life's breathing account-- My balance...unknown! © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 September 2021

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2021 6:38:00 AM

It's best not to know. Live forever, my friend. Beautiful flowers!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:11:00 AM

You are so gracious, my dearest friend , Vijay. Stay safe. Blessings.

John Lawless

Date: 9/11/2021 4:59:00 AM

...YOU SHOULD INQUIRE ABOUT OVERDRAFT PROTECTION....

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:09:00 AM

Your comments do justice to your name:LAWLESS!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/11/2021 4:44:00 AM

Wonderful metaphor, the balance is unknown, and there is no way for a loan. Our breath credit is counted and deposited just once: the day we were born. Thanks for these daily gems, dear Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thank you for your meaningful comments, dearest Lasaad. God bless you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/10/2021 11:24:00 PM

So true Demetrios, I hope your account gain lots of interest. Enjoy your weekend Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/11/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thank you my dearest friend, Tom. Have a wonderful weekend.