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My Life Time Partner

The crowd was so much
Yet you found me
The noise was very loud
Yet you recognized my voice
The road was so dark
Yet you led me through
I am happy you are my life time partner

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Gary Wayne Hill

June 19, 2013 at 7:56 AM

Sometimes so much can be said in few words. To be content with one's life is all anyone can really hope for. Your poem made me smile and feel good about life.

Olivia Nimley

June 19, 2013 at 8:58 AM

Thanks for the compliments.

John Ginesi

June 11, 2013 at 11:01 PM

Olivia, Very direct and to the point, I would have liked a bit more on this poem as it seemed a little short of being great. John

Olivia Nimley

June 12, 2013 at 3:02 AM

John, I am you had a bit of it. Love is the greatest healer.

Skat A

June 11, 2013 at 4:40 PM

Hi Olivia, i am thrilled to have you as a friend....... and I have myself a life time partner, we are not always happy, but we are together.......... I am going to enjoy following your poetry............*Skat

Olivia Nimley

June 12, 2013 at 3:09 AM

I mean love will do greater things foe you. just belive in it. Even if the rainbow surface be hopeful that your love will surely fall on the wings of a dove.

Olivia Nimley

June 12, 2013 at 3:06 AM

Skat, will do greater for you,just believe in it. Even if the rainbow surface be hopeful that your will surely fall on the wings of love.

Adeleke Adeite

June 8, 2013 at 12:30 PM

Wow! Such a concise and cool piece, this is a creative work. Keep it up!! Love hears the inaudible, sees the invisible and does the imposible! It's great to read your piece this evening Olivia, welcome to the Soup my dear friend. It's a platform to share your heart and art. Feel free to enter member contests as it will help you gain more exposure and thereby learn. The pages has a lot of features that might interest you. Enjoy your stay. Peace and Friendship, Adeleke

Olivia Nimley

June 10, 2013 at 1:57 AM

Hey Adeleke, thanks for the compliments. It's my passion to touch every heart positively with creativity.

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